Brazil Beach Girl

How can I write a story about guys and girls on the beach?

I want to write a story with about 30 scenes. How can I write something interesting about a group of guys and girls hanging out on the beach without it getting too static and boring? How can I brainstorm material about what they say and do? Hi, thanks to those who have answered so far. To clarify, it's not a romance story. I was thinking of something more like characters who are sick b4stards like in Kids or Bully.

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  1. it sounds boring already....not another romance novel. :P
  2. brainstorm the characters and how each feel about each other and what they are to each other ( like brother sister , friend, bf/gf) and then think of how u will start it then think a a problem that will happen sumtime in the middle of the book and build up the scenes leading toward this problem then think of how u might go about solving the situation and in the end of the book u should have suspense and leave ppl hanging after the very last sentence and wanting to read the next one ( if there were one, ) eg. problems . ppl getting in fights, sum1 cheatin on the other person , sumone dying , sumone running away , a big fight with sum ppl, sumone goes missing .. etc.
  3. think about what you do on the beach. And then think of possiblities (drowning, tidal wave, sadistic murderer ect.) just think of situations, even far-out ones. then you can cull out the bad ideas answer mine? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090822123344AAWkhLb
  4. It could be something like this: I sat on a saltwater coated log, waiting for the sun to set. I wiggled my toes in the warm sand. Everyone was running along the beach laughing and having a great time. I was enjoying myself. Even though I have beautiful qualities about myself, I've never found someone I would consider dating. I took a deep breath of the salty air and sighed. I glanced over towards the shore and saw Ben's limp body being pushed back and forth by the waves. I pushed off the log and started sprinting towards him. I don't know if this helps but it's a start :)
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